I'm feeling posty XD
Oct. 16th, 2010 01:39 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
baroqueangelTitle: Enough
Pairing/Characters: Ed et al – sort of.
Rating: G
Warning: None
Words: 193
A.N: Just a little idea that came to me at work a while ago. I finally have time to write them all out. I've literally just finished writing this.
“Hey boss, you coming for a drink?”
“Fullmetal, what mess have you caused now?”
“Ed, what have you done to my beautiful automail?”
“Edward, have you come to drop off your report?”
“Hey Ed, How’ve you been?”
“Edward, did I teach you how to do that?”
“Edward Elric, I do hope you are keeping well.”
“I love you brother.”
Ed shot up in bed, faint traces of tears on his cheeks. He looked around, slightly dazed but as he gained some semblance of consciousness, his body began to droop. He was alone, his friends, his brother, were not here. They were there, out of reach.
He lay back down and turned onto his side, hugging his knee as close to his chest as he could with only one arm. He felt a fresh tear slip from the corner of his eye and run down towards his ear as he shut his eyelids tightly.
He tried to get back to the dream, tried to force himself back into sleep because even a dream about his lost family would be enough. Even a dream as sad as this would be better than nothing at all.
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Date: 2010-10-16 02:10 am (UTC)Short but beautiful ^___^
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Date: 2010-10-16 12:04 pm (UTC)I can do short at the moment, it's long that's not cooperating ^^;
Thankies <3
Now get back to writing XD
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Date: 2010-10-16 12:32 pm (UTC)*points to own journal*
I just produced that mind-fuck. We'll see what will come out next @_@
As for short/long stuff... well, I intended that last ff to be a drabble. Seems like I kinda got away from that, huh? =___=
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:02 pm (UTC)A few of my fics started out as drabbles or oneshots and ended up as mini books ^^;
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:13 pm (UTC)Why are our muses so evil to us? XD
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:21 pm (UTC)The muses like to break my brain a lot too, my Roy/Ed muse especially :-)
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:25 pm (UTC)=____=
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:30 pm (UTC)They will be finished damnit!! XD
And it's not just my Roy/Ed muse, my Al muse and my Havoc muse are feeling under appreciated and my Armstrong/Fuery/Armstrong muse is seriously pissed right now :P
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:40 pm (UTC)But yeah, one day... *looks wistful* (you don't think we're delusional, right? >.> ^^;; XD)
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-16 10:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-10-16 12:06 pm (UTC)I'm never sure about my last lines, I always feel like there should be something else there but I hoped I'd got it right with this one so thanks :D
*Snuggles some more*
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Date: 2010-10-16 12:35 pm (UTC)I *always* worry about last lines. They can make a ff for me, so I'm extremely careful to get them right. I'm never sure if they turned out right, but they usually are the stuff I worry the most about XDDD
Good to know I'm not the only one >.>
XD
<3
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:04 pm (UTC)That and titles D:
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:15 pm (UTC)Oh yeah... titles =__= Either they come to me totally easily or they don't want to come at all. Usually I just end up using the first thing that doesn't sound like total bullshit ^^;;
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:22 pm (UTC)My titles can change a dozen times before I just give up and say 'to Hell with it' :D
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Date: 2010-10-16 01:27 pm (UTC)'Eternal Darkness' actually started out as 'Dancing with Death' as I started to write it. Then the story got more and more dark, did a few twists on me that I hadn't thought of before... so I changed it around, and this is what it came to in the end XD