Drabble - Immature
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baroqueangelTitle: Immature
Pairing/Characters: Ed/Al
Rating: High 13, low 17 ??
Warning: Immaturity on my part maybe? I honestly have no clue
Words: 557
Summary: Al’s got an itch
A.N: As a favour to![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
cheshirejin, I wrote for the ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
hentai_contest. This is the one that didn’t get posted there. The prompt, as I said before, was immature.
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Al looked at him and smiled, this was going to be way too easy.
“Ed, I’ve got a scratch, can you get it for me?”
“Sure Al, where is it?”
Ed stopped what he was doing and walked over to his brother who was standing in the doorway of the kitchen.
“Just there on my back, I can’t quite reach it.” Al indicated a spot just to the left of his spine about half way down his back.
“Sure.”
Ed scratched the spot Al had indicated for a few minutes before stopping and starting to move away but that was not part of Al’s plan.
“Ed, it hasn’t gone away yet, can you keep scratching please? Oh, and a bit lower.”
“Sorry Al, I didn’t realise.” Ed moved to start scratching Al’s back again, aiming for the spot he had just been working. “Is this alright?”
“A bit lower”
Ed’s hand moved lower and lower as Al directed him, the itch seeming to move from one side of his back to the other. When Ed’s hand reached the top of Al’s ass he stopped scratching but didn’t break contact.
“Al, are you sure the itch is still there?”
“Of course brother, why else would I have you scratch my back?” Al knew that Ed knew what he was doing. That not quite sweet voice that he used when he was scheming had come out and Al couldn’t stop it. He made sure to face away from Ed so he couldn’t see the smirk on his baby brother’s face.
Ed smoothed his hand down Al’s back and under the waistband of his trousers. Gently he ran his hand over the soft skin of Al’s ass, one finger drifting between the cheeks to rub briefly over the younger man’s hole.
“You know Al, if you had wanted to play this game you could have just been an adult about it. You didn’t have to act so immature and come up with an excuse for me to touch you. I don’t need an excuse to want to touch you.”
Al gasped as Ed ran his finger over his entrance, getting close to breaching but never fully doing so.
“Sorry brother, but sometimes I like to act a little juvenile. For some reason it always makes me think of you.” Al smiled as he turned to his brother, the look of amusement on Ed’s face belied what he was about to do.
“You know you shouldn’t get me going Al, you know what happens when I act immature and juvenile.”
“That’s kind of what I was counting on.”
Ed used his free hand to pull Al into a sideways kiss, his other hand still teasing Al and making him gasp. He liked it when Al got him into this mood, the childish want that he displayed when claiming his brother’s body, the one he had fought so hard to get back, was always slightly over the top. ‘Immature’ as Al called it and yet Al was always the one who initiated this need in him. Al was always the one who started it by acting childish too.
Ed figured they could be immature together, as long as they got to do the kinds of things they were about to do he didn’t mind staying immature for the rest of his life.
Pairing/Characters: Ed/Al
Rating: High 13, low 17 ??
Warning: Immaturity on my part maybe? I honestly have no clue
Words: 557
Summary: Al’s got an itch
A.N: As a favour to
cheshirejin, I wrote for the hentai_contest. This is the one that didn’t get posted there. The prompt, as I said before, was immature.~~~~~
Al looked at him and smiled, this was going to be way too easy.
“Ed, I’ve got a scratch, can you get it for me?”
“Sure Al, where is it?”
Ed stopped what he was doing and walked over to his brother who was standing in the doorway of the kitchen.
“Just there on my back, I can’t quite reach it.” Al indicated a spot just to the left of his spine about half way down his back.
“Sure.”
Ed scratched the spot Al had indicated for a few minutes before stopping and starting to move away but that was not part of Al’s plan.
“Ed, it hasn’t gone away yet, can you keep scratching please? Oh, and a bit lower.”
“Sorry Al, I didn’t realise.” Ed moved to start scratching Al’s back again, aiming for the spot he had just been working. “Is this alright?”
“A bit lower”
Ed’s hand moved lower and lower as Al directed him, the itch seeming to move from one side of his back to the other. When Ed’s hand reached the top of Al’s ass he stopped scratching but didn’t break contact.
“Al, are you sure the itch is still there?”
“Of course brother, why else would I have you scratch my back?” Al knew that Ed knew what he was doing. That not quite sweet voice that he used when he was scheming had come out and Al couldn’t stop it. He made sure to face away from Ed so he couldn’t see the smirk on his baby brother’s face.
Ed smoothed his hand down Al’s back and under the waistband of his trousers. Gently he ran his hand over the soft skin of Al’s ass, one finger drifting between the cheeks to rub briefly over the younger man’s hole.
“You know Al, if you had wanted to play this game you could have just been an adult about it. You didn’t have to act so immature and come up with an excuse for me to touch you. I don’t need an excuse to want to touch you.”
Al gasped as Ed ran his finger over his entrance, getting close to breaching but never fully doing so.
“Sorry brother, but sometimes I like to act a little juvenile. For some reason it always makes me think of you.” Al smiled as he turned to his brother, the look of amusement on Ed’s face belied what he was about to do.
“You know you shouldn’t get me going Al, you know what happens when I act immature and juvenile.”
“That’s kind of what I was counting on.”
Ed used his free hand to pull Al into a sideways kiss, his other hand still teasing Al and making him gasp. He liked it when Al got him into this mood, the childish want that he displayed when claiming his brother’s body, the one he had fought so hard to get back, was always slightly over the top. ‘Immature’ as Al called it and yet Al was always the one who initiated this need in him. Al was always the one who started it by acting childish too.
Ed figured they could be immature together, as long as they got to do the kinds of things they were about to do he didn’t mind staying immature for the rest of his life.
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Date: 2012-06-26 08:14 pm (UTC)It's been a while since I wrote a bit of Elricest, I need to have these kinds of ideas more often :)
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Date: 2012-06-26 08:25 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2012-06-26 09:21 pm (UTC)Okay, fair enough. :D I do hope hope that RL as well as prompts will allow you to write more there. :D
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Date: 2012-06-27 12:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-06-27 06:59 am (UTC)<3333
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Date: 2012-06-27 08:28 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-06-27 11:42 am (UTC)http://baroqueangel.livejournal.com/132293.html
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Date: 2012-06-27 11:36 am (UTC)http://baroqueangel.livejournal.com/132293.html
For you <333
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Date: 2012-06-27 07:59 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2012-06-27 11:40 am (UTC)It's been a while since I wrote the boys together, it felt good :)
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Date: 2012-06-30 06:30 pm (UTC)Wonderful!
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Date: 2012-06-30 09:00 pm (UTC)Al is a lot cheekier than Ed but he hides it better :)